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Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Writers of North Queensland flock to Charters Towers

The Bush Curlews added an extra little twist to their Awards Presentation Ceremony for their annual literary competition.
    This change was inspired after a few of our members attended a couple of informative writing workshops earlier this year. During those workshops we met many wonderful people, learnt heaps & had lots of fun. So the Bush Curlews decided to return the favour and invite our new literary friends to Charters Towers.
     On Sunday, 26 May 2013, authors from Townsville, Home Hill and Ayr journeyed to Charters Towers for a sumptuous lunch buffet, to attend an enlightening awards ceremony and to challenge their imaginations in our writing activity session.
      In total, there were approximately 22 participants during the writing challenges with many additional guests showing their support during the presentation of the awards.

       It was another successful event. The Bush Curlews look forward to more interaction with our fellow North Queensland writers over the coming months and years.

The Judges' Scores

Extract from Maria Caesar’s speech during the 2013 Bush Curlews Literary Awards Presentation, 26 May 2013

Overall, the scores were very close. Only 6 points separate the first Commended award from the first place in the open poetry section. And only 7 ½ points separated the first commended prize from the first place position in the open short story category.

Most of the time, scores between the judges were similar, however others….
Well, we discovered that the gender of the audience plays a big role in the response to a story or a poem, so it good that we have male and female judges for both the poetry and the short story categories.
One of my own stories was a classic example of this. Marnie and Jenny both gave it very high scores, however Kett’s score was more than 10 points less (and no, Kett "will not live that down"). Clearly, that particular story has greater appeal to a female audience. That is just one of many reasons why receiving feedback on our writing is so important. 

Once again we would like to thank our judges for the many hours of hard work required to judge and comment on each entry received in our competition.

Out of curiosity, after compiling the judges scores to determine the winners we thought it would be interesting to see which entrants received the highest score from each individual judge.
Each judge had given a highest number of points to a different entrant.

In the poetry section, both Allan & Sarah's highest scores were tied to two separate entrants.
Allan Georgee's highest score went to Shirley Syme's poem Old Bob and to Cherelle Murphy's poem Bluey.
Sarah Callcott's highest score went to Terry Slack's poem Fields of Green and to Christine Stewart's poem Two-faced.

In the short story section the judge's
Had again given their highest scores to three different entrants.
Kett Kennedy's highest score went to Jeanyne Whitmont Sekel of Nowra, NSW for her story A junior vikingess. Kett comments that Jeanyne's story "a riveting piece, well presented, well constructed and poignant".
Marnie Niemi's highest score went to Maria Caesar of Charters Towers The Final Page.  Marnie said she "enjoyed this light hearted, amusing and very unusual story with a surprise ending"
And Jenny Schaefer's highest score went to Sandy Bogilevu of Charters Towers for her story Suspended Memories. Jenny commented “the writing with its vivid and varied descriptions is an excellent reflection on another’s experience and is able to evoke in the reader an understanding of a new way of life”. 

I just have one final message for all of our authors, published or un-published, prose or poetry:

“Inspiration can be found everywhere and Writing is a process of discovery”

2013 Literary Awards Competition Results

Open Poetry
1st Place = Fields of Green by Terry Slack (Charters Towers)
2nd Place = Thinking by Cherelle Murphy (Ayr)
3rd Place = A Dog’s Dinner by Brooke McReynolds (Mackay)
Commendations:
1 = The Brumby Bay by Shirley Symes (Charters Towers)
2 = ‘Tis Meant to Be by Terry Slack (Charters Towers)
3 = Two-Faced by Christine Stewart (Ayr)
4 = The Outhouse by Cherelle Murphy (Ayr)
5 = Old Bob by Shirley Symes (Charters Towers)

Junior Poetry
1st Place = Waves of Indecision by Michael Lowe (Charters Towers)
2nd Place = The Perfect Place for Me by Jacklenn Dart (Charters Towers)
3rd Place = A Lonely Widow by Charly Burge (Charters Towers)
Commendation = Moving to the City by Logan Guldbransen (Charters Towers)

Open Short Story
1st Place = Kathy Doesn’t Live Here Anymore by Lori Hurst (Townsville)
2nd Place = The Doors by Christine Stewart (Ayr)
3rd Place = The Final Page by Maria Caesar (Charters Towers)
Commendations:
1 = Voices in the Night by Kerry Lown Whalen (Varsity Lakes)
2 = Hannah’s Dilemma by Carole Phillips (Charters Towers)
3 = Days of Diamonds and Stones by Carole Phillips (Charters Towers)
4 = Emily by Maria Caesar (Charters Towers)

Junior Short Story
1st Place = Man’s Best Friend by Kirsty Healing (Charters Towers)

Additional Prizes (courtesy of Dr Kett Kennedy, administrator of the Siriol Kate Giffney Estate):
A $50 cheque to the Highest score for local Junior Short Story entry = Kirsty Healing
A book to the Highest score for local Open Short Story entry =

Maria Caesar

Writers of North Queensland work together

Earlier this year (2013) the Bush Curlews were invited by WITS (Writers in Townsville) to participate in a new and exciting joint project. WITS are putting together an anthology.
     The finished product will include stories and poems from members of writers groups based in Townsville, Charters Towers, Home Hill and Ayr. The anthology is due for an official launch in October as part of the annual Queensland Writers Week celebrations.
     Each group provided submissions based on the theme of promoting their home towns. To keep with page limitations, majority of the accepted stories will have approximately 500 words, whilst poetry will be restricted to 30 lines. Depending on space, quality and topic repetitiveness, there may be a few exceptions to the rule.

    Members of the Bush Curlews worked furiously to meet the project’s deadline. Several of our members have been notified of their successful submissions.  The group is looking forward to flicking through the pages of the final product. 

Tuesday, 10 July 2012

What Judges are seeking



Have you ever wondered what gives one story “the edge” over another in a competition?

Whilst compiling results for the 2010-2011 Bush Curlews Literary Awards Competition, we kept a list of key elements based on the comments written by our three judges.

1. It’s important to have a good opening

2. Needs to have good spelling and be grammatically sound
3. Be well-constructed and flow easily
4. Stories work best if they include a build-up and climax

5. Don’t have sentences too long
6. Pay attention to the rhythm and tempo in poems
7. Stories and poems need to have a clear message
8. Sexually explicit details and swearing doesn't appeal to all readers and our judges gave entries with such content a lower score.

9. Be emotional, but not too personal

10. Have thought-provoking/educational topics relevant to today
11. Include strong and credible characters who inter-relate well.
12. Stories and poems displaying originality rated highly with our judges
13. It’s vital to have a good ending, such as: amusing, optimistic and/or unexpected

14. Don’t have an obscure or confusing ending

A competition incentive


By Maria Caesar
 
When we host a competition no entrant goes empty handed. Whether or not a cheque or certificate has been earned, our judges have been able to provide what all writers strive to attain – constructive criticism on their work. 
So at a glance entrants can see the elements of their work which needs to be improved and which parts they should simply maintain. Our judges will even correct the spelling and grammar if required – all of this goes towards helping budding Australian writers to enrich their work and develop their skills to one day be published or to increase their chances towards winning other literary competitions.